Isao Bitou - Ashita no Joe

[Ryuhoshi]

Hi, i'm from Poland and i made my first song, opening from anime Ashita no Joe.
I used UltraStar Creator, MixMeister BPM Analyzer and in build Ultrastar song editor.
What can i/should i do to make it better?
Thanks!

[subkei]

Hi Ryuhoshi, Welcome to our community!
Is a nice song, so much passion in this oldie song

Let's start with technicalities...
This is a TV size, the title must be "Ashita no Joe (TV)"

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BPM value, in YASS use [CTRL+M] to duplicate without losing the synchro. The correct value, 188.49 x 2 = 236.98.

Some adjustments in the lyric...
line 1: join "Sa-n" like "San" in one note with length 3 squares.
line 3: "a-n-chi" like "anchi". "sho-u" like "shou".
line 5: in lowercase like "Ta-ta-ke! ta-ta-ke! ta-ta-ke!"
line 10: could be like "Rururu ruru rururu".
lines 11, 12: "A-shi-ta" like "Ashi-ta" or "A-shita".

Do these improvements and for the next time, attached the text file.
Later, we continue with the pitch correction and synchro.

Bye!

[subkei]

Enviado MP y esperando respuesta de continuidad.